[She isn't quite sure how to take the criticism. Honestly, it's sort of a novel concept. Her father indulged her in everything and until the end never said a bad word about her or any of her choices. His advisors didn't even try. No one wanted to upset their boss' daughter. So Asami sort of bites her lip a little, uncertain of how to proceed.]
Are you sure? I could change it-- it wouldn't be too hard, I've got quite a few notes.
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Are you sure? I could change it-- it wouldn't be too hard, I've got quite a few notes.