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monet "punch more things" st. croix ( ℳ. ) ([personal profile] superieure) wrote in [community profile] tushanshu 2013-12-22 02:59 pm (UTC)

[She nods, semi-listening as she examines each of the messages, analysing as much of his body language as she can. She looks over them twice, then side-by-side, and after several minutes of silent, intense study, steps back.]

I doubt it, but confirmation is preferable. What ['should I do to him' sounds a bit like overkill - and anyway this isn't an X-Factor case, where there'll be a clear wrongdoer and a clear victim who's come to them for help. This is something she's doing on her own time.] questions did you have in mind, specifically?

[Or she'll just make up her own.]

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