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Aya ([personal profile] looksfine) wrote in [community profile] tushanshu2014-04-06 01:56 pm

➢ 004 | VIDEO

[You may be pleased to know, certain residents of Keelai, that Aya had no intentions of offering another long-winded highly detailed technical analysis of...whatever it is she's up to at the moment.  In fact, her latest message is surprisingly simple:]

It has been brought to my attention that my choice of vocabulary and diction is considered...unnecessarily formal by some.

[To put it mildly.]

I have made several attempts to alter my speech patterns, but have realized that I still lack a more concise understanding of what precisely entails formal versus familiar speech.  Therefore, I am seeking any an all information regarding more colloquial expressions or terms that may be used in everyday conversation, which I will do my best to learn and subsequently employ accordingly.

Thank you.



((PRIVATE TO: HAL JORDAN (2011) - 100% AYA ENCRYPTED))

[Her eyes narrow, however, when the following message is delivered.  Anger was not quite an accurate assessment of her emotions at that particular moment...but annoyance wouldn't have been a stretch.]

You did not follow through with your agreement to meet with me last month, and have since done nothing to rectify this error.

I wish to know why.
denyamenti: /withlace (as i wrench bone and sinew from skin)

Re: voice;

[personal profile] denyamenti 2014-04-10 04:09 am (UTC)(link)
She accuses, having finished assuming I had not intended to share my insight on what I thought of the situation.
denyamenti: (has all living hearts betrayed)

Re: voice;

[personal profile] denyamenti 2014-04-10 04:11 am (UTC)(link)
That depends. Are you going to ask nicely?
denyamenti: /withlace (that to offer a hand was something i did)

Re: voice;

[personal profile] denyamenti 2014-04-10 04:19 am (UTC)(link)
Then yes, your assumptions are without merit. On a positive note, you've managed to emulate pettiness. Be sure to record that in your logbook.
denyamenti: (lead us into these waste seas)

Re: voice;

[personal profile] denyamenti 2014-04-10 01:18 pm (UTC)(link)
We will see if another continuation comes of it later.