Hmm, prose is a bit overwrought, but otherwise it's okay. Three out of five stars.

Add more talking next time and less doin' it. Like, why should I care? Make me get invested in the story.

[One of the children Valdis is so worried about may or may not read and/or write the occasional smutfic of her own. Look, she's a nerdy teenager in 2017. Her hobbies are saving the world, video games, and tumblr.]